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2013-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Isabel

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It's very hard. I can't breath. and If I don't have air conditioner, I can't live in Korea. Summer is very hot and humid mixed with rain. My skin is damp with sweat. Oh my god!!! 1. Who will be coming along with Tim and ___? b) me 2. He wants you to give the gifts to Shiela and ____ . b) me 3. The old man and _____ were sitting on the park bench. a) I 4. Kevin, Jim, Ted and ___ were all supposed to be going to the cinema tomorrow evening. a) I 5. You can leave the rest of the money with Tim or ____ . b) me 6. She doesn't want to be seen with my mother or ___ . b) me 7. Both my father and ___ would love to visit India one day. a)I 8. My best friend and ___ wanted to go camping in Devon. a) I 9. She really wanted to come camping with my best friend and ___ . b) me 10. Sue, her friend and ___ all wanted to finish our essays first. a) I

강사 첨삭

Hello sister! Happy Thursday! :)Thank you so much for sending this in!Your effort is highly appreciated.Keep on writing, okay?:) Maybe you can go here in the Philippines. Not just anywhere in the Philippines, but here in Baguio because it is a bit cooler here than in any other place; I think.:)I will see you in class!^^ Always, T. Isabel :)   It\'s very hard. >>Correct [hot]^^I can\'t breath. >>I can\'t breathe.and If I don\'t have air conditioner, I can\'t live in Korea. >>If I don\'t have an air conditioner, I won\'t be able to live in Korea.Summer is very hot and humid mixed with rain. >>It is very hot and humid mixed with rain in summer.My skin is damp with sweat. >>Correct!Oh my god!!!>>Correct^^1. Who will be coming along with Tim and ___?b) me >>Correct!2. He wants you to give the gifts to Shiela and ____ . b) me >>Correct!3. The old man and _____ were sitting on the park bench.a) I >>Correct!4. Kevin, Jim, Ted and ___ were all supposed to be going to the cinema tomorrow evening. a) I >>Correct!5. You can leave the rest of the money with Tim or ____ . b) me >>Correct!6. She doesn\'t want to be seen with my mother or ___ . b) me >>Correct!7. Both my father and ___ would love to visit India one day. a)I >>Correct!8. My best friend and ___ wanted to go camping in Devon. a) I >>Correct!9. She really wanted to come camping with my best friend and ___ . b) me >>Correct!10. Sue, her friend and ___ all wanted to finish our essays first. a) I >>Correct!

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