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2013-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Isabel

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Sorry, my dear sister. I informed you that i went to my hometown. Then, my father's leg have broken 3 month ago. Now my mother have went to the tample for my brother. Because my borother is going to take the college s[이름]lastic ability test 2 months later. So i am taking care of my father. I can't do today class. Sorry. I will go to my home today afternoon. Therefore we can meet tomorrow. By~~

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear sister! I\'m so sorry to hear about about your father. Is he doing better now? I hope he is. So, you\'re a nurse for today? Wow! :) I think your father will heal faster if you\'re always beside him. :) Anyway, how did he get his leg fracture? About your brother, I know he can do it. With the prayers offered by your mother, he will surely pass. :) It\'s sad to know that we couldn\'t talk today. But we will make it up tomorrow, okay? :) Enjoy your stay with your family sis! :) I\'ll call you tomorrow! :) Be happy and smile always! :) Always, T. Isabel :) Sorry, my dear sister. >>I\'m sorry my dear sister. I informed you that i went to my hometown. >>I informed you that I went to my hometown.Then, my father\'s leg have broken 3 month ago. >>Then, my father\'s leg was broken 3 months ago. >>OR: Three months ago, my father had a leg fracture.Now my mother have went to the tample for my brother. >>Now, my mother went to the temple for my brother.Because my borother is going to take the college s[이름]lastic ability test 2 months later. >>It\'s because my brother is going to take the college s[이름]lastic ability test after 2 months.So i am taking care of my father. >>So, I am taking  care of my father.I can\'t do today class. Sorry. >>I can\'t attend today\'s class. I\'m sorry.I will go to my home today afternoon. >>I will go home this afternoon.Therefore we can meet tomorrow. By~~ >>Correct! Bye!

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