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학생이 쓴 원문
Sorry, my dear sister.
I informed you that i went to my hometown.
Then, my father's leg have broken 3 month ago.
Now my mother have went to the tample for my brother.
Because my borother is going to take the college s[이름]lastic ability test 2 months later.
So i am taking care of my father.
I can't do today class. Sorry.
I will go to my home today afternoon.
Therefore we can meet tomorrow. By~~
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear sister!
I\'m so sorry to hear about about your father.
Is he doing better now? I hope he is.
So, you\'re a nurse for today? Wow! :)
I think your father will heal faster if you\'re always beside him. :)
Anyway, how did he get his leg fracture?
About your brother, I know he can do it.
With the prayers offered by your mother, he will surely pass. :)
It\'s sad to know that we couldn\'t talk today.
But we will make it up tomorrow, okay? :)
Enjoy your stay with your family sis! :)
I\'ll call you tomorrow! :)
Be happy and smile always! :)
Always,
T. Isabel :)
Sorry, my dear sister.
>>I\'m sorry my dear sister. I informed you that i went to my hometown.
>>I informed you that I went to my hometown.Then, my father\'s leg have broken 3 month ago.
>>Then, my father\'s leg was broken 3 months ago.
>>OR: Three months ago, my father had a leg fracture.Now my mother have went to the tample for my brother.
>>Now, my mother went to the temple for my brother.Because my borother is going to take the college s[이름]lastic ability test 2 months later.
>>It\'s because my brother is going to take the college s[이름]lastic ability test after 2 months.So i am taking care of my father.
>>So, I am taking care of my father.I can\'t do today class. Sorry.
>>I can\'t attend today\'s class. I\'m sorry.I will go to my home today afternoon.
>>I will go home this afternoon.Therefore we can meet tomorrow. By~~
>>Correct! Bye!
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