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2010-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi dear Joanna! Did you have a good day! I have a meaningful English speaking weekend! As what you advised ,I enjoy learning English and have fun with English speaking in our lesson! Learning English is my favorite and pleasure to me in these days ! If I exaggeratedly say that,"it's everything to me in the middle of toughly working days with my company." But sometime , I started feeling reget that I didn't study hard English during my youngger time.But I'm happy ,last lesson, I heard from you that you can help me. On a second thought,the reason why I want to learn English is that , I might wanna find a work that I really love in relation to English! That's right!I hope that I find work that I love Thank you!,I will wait for your call on Monday! See you then!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Martin, Believe in yourself. Keep practicing the language and you will make it. I pray that you can find a job that is related to English in the near future. Have fun!   Hi dear Joanna! Did you have a good day! >>>Hi Joanna! Did you have a good day? >>>Dear [Name],       Did  you have a good day? I have a meaningful English speaking weekend! >>>I had a meaningful English speaking weekend! >>>I’m having a meaningful English speaking weekend!As what you advised ,I enjoy learning English and have fun with English speaking in our lesson! >>>okayLearning English is my favorite and pleasure to me in these days ! >>>Learning English is my favorite thing to do and my pleasure these days.If I exaggeratedly say that,"it's everything to me in the middle of toughly working days with my company." >>>I may sound exaggerated if I say, “It’s everything to me even in the middle of my tough working days in the company.”, but I do enjoy English nowadays.But sometime , >>>But sometimes,I started feeling reget that I didn't study hard English during my youngger time.But I'm happy ,last lesson, I heard from you that you can help me. >>>I regret of not studying hard in English during my younger time. Nevertheless, I am happy after hearing from you that you can help me with my English.On a second thought,the reason why I want to learn English is that , I might wanna find a work that I really love in relation to English!That's right!I hope that I find a work that I love. >>>great!Thank you! I will wait for your call on Monday! See you then!! >>>correct

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