Hi~~
학생이 쓴 원문
hi teacher??
today weather was strange!
some time was sunny other time was rainy with thunder and lightning.
weather is crazy@_@ Ha-Ha-
today i feel very good! because i play with my friends
but raining.
today i don't have story...
then my letter is end.
good night teacher~~~♥
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!!
It\'s Tuesday already!!
Thank you for this letter.
I am happy that you played with your friends today.
See you in class!!
~ T. Giselle ^_^
hi teacher??
>> Hi teacher!!today weather was strange!
>> Today\'s weather was strange!some time was sunny other time was rainy with thunder and lightning.
>> In some parts of the day, it was sunny. Then it was rainy with thunder and lightning.weather is crazy@_@ Ha-Ha-
>> The weather is crazy @_@ Ha-Ha-today i feel very good!
>> Correct!
because i play with my friends but raining.
>> Because I played with my friends but it rained.today i don\'t have story...
>> Today, I don\'t have a story for you...then my letter is end.
>> My letter ends here.good night teacher~~~♥
>>Good night teacher.
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