Hi~~

2013-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

hi teacher?? today weather was strange! some time was sunny other time was rainy with thunder and lightning. weather is crazy@_@ Ha-Ha- today i feel very good! because i play with my friends but raining. today i don't have story... then my letter is end. good night teacher~~~♥

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!! It\'s Tuesday already!! Thank you for this letter. I am happy that you played with your friends today. See you in class!! ~ T. Giselle ^_^   hi teacher?? >> Hi teacher!!today weather was strange! >> Today\'s weather was strange!some time was sunny other time was rainy with thunder and lightning. >> In some parts of the day, it was sunny. Then it was rainy with thunder and lightning.weather is crazy@_@ Ha-Ha- >> The weather is crazy @_@ Ha-Ha-today i feel very good! >> Correct! because i play with my friends but raining. >> Because I played with my friends but it rained.today i don\'t have story... >> Today, I don\'t have a story for you...then my letter is end. >> My letter ends here.good night teacher~~~♥ >>Good night teacher.

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