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2013-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Isabel

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I'm going to the health center. So, we may don't answer. Just kidding. What is favoite sport in your country? And, dear my sis, you will meet my boyfriend tommorow. beacuse I recommend that you teach very well, so my boyfreind change his class. Did I do well? 1. I'm quite heavy now, but when I was younger I was very _______. b. thin 2. Don't sit on the grass. It's still_______because it was raining earlier today. b. wet 3. It's a very _______story. It made me cry when I read it. a. sad 4. It's not_______to remember all the new words when you are learning a language. b. slow 5. In my country, a few people are very rich, but many people are _______. b. poor

강사 첨삭

Hello my dearest sister! :) Are you going to the health club? I hope you will enjoy your time! :P For your question, I think it\'s basketball. Most Filipinos love basketball. I\'m also a fan. :P Really?? What\'s his name? Oh my god! I\'m excited! :) You recommended me to be his teacher?? You really love me! :P I owe you a lot my dear. I hope I can repay you. I will try to be an effective teacher for him. :) And you did great with your homework. I\'m very proud of you! :) Enjoy your time in the health club sis! :) Be happy and smile always! :) Always, T. Isabel :) I\'m going to tI he health center. >>Correct!So, we may don\'t answer. >>DID YOU MEAN: So, I may not answer your call. >>OR: So, I may not do my homework.Just kidding. >>Correct!What is favoite sport in your country? >>What is the favorite sport in your country? >>OR: What is the most popular sport in your country?And, dear my sis, you will meet my boyfriend tommorow. >>And my dear sis, you will meet my boyfriend tomorrow.beacuse I recommend that you teach very well, so my boyfreind change his class.>>Because I recommended you to my boyfriend, he changed his class. >>OR: Because I told him that you teach very well, so my boyfriend changed his class. Did I do well? >>Correct!1. I\'m quite heavy now, but when I was younger I was very _______.b. thin >>Correct!2. Don\'t sit on the grass. It\'s still_______because it was raining earlier today.b. wet >>Correct!3. It\'s a very _______story. It made me cry when I read it.a. sad>>Correct!4. It\'s not_______to remember all the new words when you are learning a language.b. slow>>a. easy5. In my country, a few people are very rich, but many people are _______.b. poor >>Correct!

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