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I think we should be involved in recycling.
Because resources are limited and lack of space for garbage.
We also know how to recycle.
I think we should practice what we know is.
I'm good at recycling.
In Korea, there are designated recycling day.
On Monday, rubber gloves, plastic and vinyl.
On Tuesday, food waste, Styrofoam[stáiərəfòum]
On Wednesday, bottles, cans, paper, scrap metal, clothes
On Thursday, food waste, household waste
Friday, Saturday prohibits the discharge.
How many hours you there trip your hospital?
How many minute?
From your house to the hospital?
I must change to take the subway to the bus. subway take 2minute and bus take 2minute. But walk and subway and walk and bus~! So totally take 10minute.
Just walk take 20minute.hihi...
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Hi, Mi [이름]..Its good that you also participate in recycling things in your country since it is one of the serious problem among each countries nowadays. Also, I appreciate you for doing a good job for your composition. Keep it up! See you!
I think we should be involved in recycling.
>> Correct Because resources are limited and lack of space for garbage.
>>Because resources are limited and we lack space for garbage. We also know how to recycle.
>>CorrectI think we should practice what we know is.
>>I think we should practice what we know.I'm good at recycling.
>>CorrectIn Korea, there are designated recycling day.
>>In Korea, there are designated day for recycling.On Monday, rubber gloves, plastic and vinyl.
>> CorrectOn Tuesday, food waste, Styrofoam[stáiərəfòum]
>>On Tuesday, food waste, and Styrofoam[stáiərəfòum]On Wednesday, bottles, cans, paper, scrap metal, clothes
>>On Wednesday, bottles, cans, paper, scrap metal, and clothes.On Thursday, food waste, household waste
>>On Thursday, food waste, and household waste Friday, Saturday prohibits the discharge.>>Fridays and Saturdays discharge is prohibited.How many hours you there trip your hospital?
>> How many hours is your trip to the hospital?How many minute?
>>For how many minutes?From your house to the hospital?
>> How about from your house to the hospital?
I must change to take the subway to the bus. subway take 2minute and bus take 2minute. But walk and subway and walk and bus~! So totally take 10minute. Just walk take 20minute.hihi...
>>I must take the subway instead of the bus. They both take 2 minutes. So overall it would take 10 minutes. I rather walk for 20 minutes.
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