Hi!!

2013-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hello teacher~~ today is very boring time!! because i had studied. but sunner vacation homework....Ha-Ha- summer vacation homework so many!! I disappointed my school teacher~~ but i almost finish homework!! but i should finish my english academy homework. why homework so many?? i am so sad.... today i writing about homework. i don't have stories. i will go to bed.. good bye teacher~~♥

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!! It\'s so sad that you have to finish a lot of homework. :( Do not worry, you can all finish them soon! Always do your best! See you tomorrow!! ~ T. Giselle ^^ ~~   Hello teacher~~ >> Correct!today is very boring time!! because i had studied. >> Today was very boring because I had to study. >> OR: I was bored today because I had to study.but sunner vacation homework....Ha-Ha- >> I did my summer vacation homework. Ha-Ha-summer vacation homework so many!! >> I have so many summer vacation homework!! I disappointed my school teacher~~ >> I am disappointed by my school teacher. ~~but i almost finish homework!! >> But I am almost done with my homework!! but i should finish my english academy homework. >> I should also finish my English academy homework.why homework so many?? >>  Why do I have so many homework??i am so sad.... >>I am so sad.today i writing about homework. >> Today, I wrote about my homework.i don\'t have stories. >> Correct. >> OR: I don\'t have stories to tell you.i will go to bed.. >> I will go to bed now. good bye teacher~~♥ >>Good bye teacher.

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