Hi!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello teacher~~
today is very boring time!! because i had studied.
but sunner vacation homework....Ha-Ha-
summer vacation homework so many!! I disappointed my school teacher~~
but i almost finish homework!! but i should finish my english academy homework.
why homework so many??
i am so sad....
today i writing about homework.
i don't have stories.
i will go to bed.. good bye teacher~~♥
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!!
It\'s so sad that you have to finish a lot of homework. :(
Do not worry, you can all finish them soon!
Always do your best!
See you tomorrow!!
~ T. Giselle ^^ ~~
Hello teacher~~
>> Correct!today is very boring time!! because i had studied.
>> Today was very boring because I had to study.
>> OR: I was bored today because I had to study.but sunner vacation homework....Ha-Ha-
>> I did my summer vacation homework. Ha-Ha-summer vacation homework so many!!
>> I have so many summer vacation homework!!
I disappointed my school teacher~~
>> I am disappointed by my school teacher. ~~but i almost finish homework!!
>> But I am almost done with my homework!!
but i should finish my english academy homework.
>> I should also finish my English academy homework.why homework so many??
>> Why do I have so many homework??i am so sad....
>>I am so sad.today i writing about homework.
>> Today, I wrote about my homework.i don\'t have stories.
>> Correct.
>> OR: I don\'t have stories to tell you.i will go to bed..
>> I will go to bed now.
good bye teacher~~♥
>>Good bye teacher.
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