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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.
Long time no do homework.
What's happen??
Today, The connection was bad.
I couldn't exatly understand your tales.
You called me agin, but The connection was bad.
The resion is tyhoppn?
Are you okay??
1. the camera / Tom
Tom has his camera.
2. the eyes / the cat
The cat also has the hers eyes like people.
3. the names / friends
Two of my friends hasn't had theirs names.
4. the daughter / Mr. [Name] Smith used to play the games with his daughter.
5. the toys / the children
The children has hers toys.
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear sister!
Yes, it\'s been a long time since your last homework.
But it\'s okay, I totally understand. :)
I don\'t know the exact reason of the bad connection.
Maybe you\'re right. Maybe it\'s the typhoon.
It\'s raining nonstop here in the Philippines.
But don\'t worry, I\'m still alive. :)
Thanks for your concern anyway. :)
For the homework my dear, when we say possessive form, we\'re actually talking about
the apostrophe s (\'s or \'), okay? I wrote down my corrections for you. :)
Enjoy the ramyun and samgyimpsal! :)
Be happy and smile always! :)
Always,
T. Isabel :)
Hi.
>>Correct!Long time no do homework.
>>It\'s been a long time since the last time I did my homework.What\'s happen??
>>What happened?
>>OR: What\'s happening?Today, The connection was bad.
>>Correct!I couldn\'t exatly understand your tales.
>>Correct! spelling [exactly]
>>I couldn\'t exactly understand what you were saying.You called me agin, but The connection was bad.
>>Correct! [again]
>>OR: You called me again but still, the connection was bad.The resion is tyhoppn?
>>Is the typhoon the reason?Are you okay??
>>Correct!1. the camera / TomTom has his camera.>>Tom\'s camera2. the eyes / the catThe cat also has the hers eyes like people.>>Cat\'s eyes3. the names / friendsTwo of my friends hasn\'t had theirs names.>>Friends\' names4. the daughter / Mr. [Name] used to play the games with his daughter.>>Mr. [Name]\'s daughters5. the toys / the childrenThe children has hers toys.
>>Children\'s toys
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