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2013-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Isabel

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Hi. Long time no do homework. What's happen?? Today, The connection was bad. I couldn't exatly understand your tales. You called me agin, but The connection was bad. The resion is tyhoppn? Are you okay?? 1. the camera / Tom Tom has his camera. 2. the eyes / the cat The cat also has the hers eyes like people. 3. the names / friends Two of my friends hasn't had theirs names. 4. the daughter / Mr. [Name] Smith used to play the games with his daughter. 5. the toys / the children The children has hers toys.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear sister! Yes, it\'s been a long time since your last homework. But it\'s okay, I totally understand. :) I don\'t know the exact reason of the bad connection. Maybe you\'re right. Maybe it\'s the typhoon. It\'s raining nonstop here in the Philippines. But don\'t worry, I\'m still alive. :) Thanks for your concern anyway. :) For the homework my dear, when we say possessive form, we\'re actually talking about the apostrophe s (\'s or \'), okay? I wrote down my corrections for you. :) Enjoy the ramyun and samgyimpsal! :) Be happy and smile always! :) Always, T. Isabel :) Hi. >>Correct!Long time no do homework. >>It\'s been a long time since the last time I did my homework.What\'s happen?? >>What happened? >>OR: What\'s happening?Today, The connection was bad. >>Correct!I couldn\'t exatly understand your tales. >>Correct! spelling [exactly] >>I couldn\'t exactly understand what you were saying.You called me agin, but The connection was bad. >>Correct! [again] >>OR: You called me again but still, the connection was bad.The resion is tyhoppn? >>Is the typhoon the reason?Are you okay?? >>Correct!1. the camera / TomTom has his camera.>>Tom\'s camera2. the eyes / the catThe cat also has the hers eyes like people.>>Cat\'s eyes3. the names / friendsTwo of my friends hasn\'t had theirs names.>>Friends\' names4. the daughter / Mr. [Name] used to play the games with his daughter.>>Mr. [Name]\'s daughters5. the toys / the childrenThe children has hers toys. >>Children\'s toys

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