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I will introduce myself to you. I'm 29 years old and I live in Seoul. I'm a student at UCLA but taking leave of absence and working as a teacher at the same time. Since I know that I'm at mid-high level, I want you to focus on fixing my errors. I saw your feedback of the first call and I notice that you taught me some wrong sentences. I'll be glad if you pick my mistakes but try to be "right" and this is all I want from you. I might me little mean to you because you should know absolutely more than me and I should improve my English through your teaching. So please be strict to you and me. Thank you and bye!

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition. I\'m glad that you took time to introduce yourself through this composition. Anyway, I just wonder what wrong sentences I taught you on the first class. I would really appreciate it if you could point out the \"wrong sentences\" I wrote on your evaluation. Since you\'re also a teacher, I guess I have to consider and analyze those \"wrong\" sentences so I can check them and make them \"right\". I listened to our recording before writing the grammar errors and corrections, so you may also refer to the audio file of our first class, which is provided in the website, for you to check it further. Please don\'t get me wrong in writing those grammar corrections because that\'s what my job requires me to do. Don\'t worry, I don\'t find you mean at all. I understand that you are just trying to state your opinion and this composition board gives you the freedom to express yourself. I guarantee you that I am taking your comment as constructive criticism for me to become a better person. Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ I will introduce myself to you. >> Correct I\'m 29 years old and I live in Seoul. >> Correct I\'m a student at UCLA but taking leave of absence and working as a teacher at the same time. >> I\'m a student at UCLA, but I\'m taking some time off from school and now I\'m working as a teacher. Since I know that I\'m at mid-high level, I want you to focus on fixing my errors. >> Correct I saw your feedback of the first call and I notice that you taught me some wrong sentences. >> I saw your feedback for the first call and I noticed that you taught me some wrong sentences. I\'ll be glad if you pick my mistakes but try to be \"right\" and this is all I want from you. >> I\'ll be glad if you point out my mistakes, but try to be \"right\" because this is all I want from you. I might me little mean to you because you should know absolutely more than me and I should improve my English through your teaching. >> I might be a little mean to you because you should absolutely know better than I do, and I should improve my English skills through your teaching. So please be strict to you and me. >> Correct Thank you and bye! >> Correct