Hi^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~~ How are you today Leny?
Did you have a lunch well?
Now, I am preparing to work after meal.
This time is very sleepy, Because of languor after a meal.
So I went to outside from office and a little walk after meal.
I am still awaking now.:)
And maybe, I should go to customer's office at afternoon.
To be honest, I don't want to go there, Because the client made be vexatious to boss and me.
Thier had changed the word everytimes. I think thier would not different usual time today also(too).
So, I am more vexatious.T,T;
Anyway, Today is busy too.
However, I am thank you for God, Because of He make me to work.
Many Koreans don't get anywork.
(Many Koreans don't have a job.)
But I'm working now, it's a blessing.
I hope you thank you for God gave the Job.
Have a good time for rest of the day.
Bye Leny~
From Kirk.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kirk!
Good afternoon! ^^
I\'m having a great afternoon here.
I enjoyed my meal as well earlier. I hope you did too.
Thank you for this great writing, Kirk!
You did it well!
You mentioned that you\'re thankful about your job.
I agree with you!
We should consider our jobs as a blessing and not a curse.
Let us always be thankful to Him!
You enjoy your afternoon also.
I\'ll see you in class tomorrow.
T. Leny
Hi. How are you today Leny?>>> CORRECTDid you have a lunch well?>>> Did you have your lunch well?Now, I am preparing to work after meal.>>> As for me, I am preparing to go back to work.This time is very sleepy, Because of languor after a meal.>>> This time I\'m very sleepy because of the food that I ate.So I went to outside from office and a little walk after meal.>>> So after eating I went outside a had a short walk.I am still awaking now.:)>>> This is the reason why I\'m still awake this time.And may be, I should go to customer\'s office at afternoon.>>> Maybe I shall go to my customer\'s office this afternoon.
>>> Perhaps I am going to one of our customer\'s office this afternoon.To be honest, I don\'t want to go there, Because the client made be vexatious to boss and me.>>> To be honest, I don\'t want to go there because my client makes me and my boss vexatious.Thier had changed the word everytimes.
>>> They change their words everytime.
I think thier would not different usual time today also(too).>>> I think they will change what they\'ll say again this time.So, I am more vexatious.T,T;>>> So I feel more vexatious.Anyway, Today is busy too.>>> Anyway, I\'m busy today.However, I am thank you for God, Because of He made me to work.>>> However, no matter how busy I am, I\'m still thankful to God because He gave me work to do.Many Koreans haven\'t get anywork.
>>> Many Koreans don\'t have work thesedays.
But I\'m working now, it\'s a blessing.>>> But because I\'m working now, I see it as a blessing.
you thank you for God gave the Job.>>> You should as well be thankful to God that you have a job.Have a good time for rest of the day.>>> Have a good time for the rest of the day.Bye Leny~>>> CORRECTFrom Kirk.
>>>CORRECT
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