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2013-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Hi~~ How are you today Leny? Did you have a lunch well? Now, I am preparing to work after meal. This time is very sleepy, Because of languor after a meal. So I went to outside from office and a little walk after meal. I am still awaking now.:) And maybe, I should go to customer's office at afternoon. To be honest, I don't want to go there, Because the client made be vexatious to boss and me. Thier had changed the word everytimes. I think thier would not different usual time today also(too). So, I am more vexatious.T,T; Anyway, Today is busy too. However, I am thank you for God, Because of He make me to work. Many Koreans don't get anywork. (Many Koreans don't have a job.) But I'm working now, it's a blessing. I hope you thank you for God gave the Job. Have a good time for rest of the day. Bye Leny~ From Kirk.

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Hi there, Kirk! Good afternoon! ^^ I\'m having a great afternoon here. I enjoyed my meal as well earlier. I hope you did too. Thank you for this great writing, Kirk! You did it well! You mentioned that you\'re thankful about your job. I agree with you! We should consider our jobs as a blessing and not a curse. Let us always be thankful to Him! You enjoy your afternoon also. I\'ll see you in class tomorrow. T. Leny Hi. How are you today Leny?>>> CORRECTDid you have a lunch well?>>> Did you have your lunch well?Now, I am preparing to work after meal.>>> As for me, I am preparing to go back to work.This time is very sleepy, Because of languor after a meal.>>> This time I\'m very sleepy because of the food that I ate.So I went to outside from office and a little walk after meal.>>> So after eating I went outside a had a short walk.I am still awaking now.:)>>> This is the reason why I\'m still awake this time.And may be, I should go to customer\'s office at afternoon.>>> Maybe I shall go to my customer\'s office this afternoon. >>> Perhaps I am going to one of our customer\'s office this afternoon.To be honest, I don\'t want to go there, Because the client made be vexatious to boss and me.>>> To be honest, I don\'t want to go there because my client makes me and my boss vexatious.Thier had changed the word everytimes. >>> They change their words everytime. I think thier would not different usual time today also(too).>>> I think they will change what they\'ll say again this time.So, I am more vexatious.T,T;>>> So I feel more vexatious.Anyway, Today is busy too.>>> Anyway, I\'m busy today.However, I am thank you for God, Because of He made me to work.>>> However, no matter how busy I am, I\'m still thankful to God because He gave me work to do.Many Koreans haven\'t get anywork. >>> Many Koreans don\'t have work thesedays. But I\'m working now, it\'s a blessing.>>> But because I\'m working now, I see it as a blessing. you thank you for God gave the Job.>>> You should as well be thankful to God that you have a job.Have a good time for rest of the day.>>> Have a good time for the rest of the day.Bye Leny~>>> CORRECTFrom Kirk. >>>CORRECT

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