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2013-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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I am thankful to you what your correction. I checked to do to your correction, I saw to my composition is not good. However, I will not give up. Because, I can do it perfect when i never give up. Please, You do not give up also to teach me.:) I'm busy today also. I went to go working place early this morning, and i arrive to my office now. I want to go my home. But, My boss is not think to go to home.T,T; And i am hungry now. So i want eating dinner. Please, I want to Boss who say to me "go home".T,T;; Hungry..... Anyway, You will must eating dinner with you like.

강사 첨삭

Hi, there. How was your day? I am also thankful for your effort and participation in our class. I want to say that you wont lose marks for wrong answers or sentences. I won\'t give up teaching you and correcting your errors. You already have the idea it\'s just that you can\'t express them in English properly and I\'m here to help you hone that skill,your English skill.Keep going. Don\'t hold back. You can do it. I hope that you had a healthy and yummy dinner! (^_^). Good night.   -Teacher Leny-   I am thankful to you what your correction.>> I am thankful to your corrections.I checked to do to your correction, I saw to my composition is not good.>> I checked your correction and I saw that my composition is not good.However, I will not give up. >> Correct Because, I can do it perfect when i never give up.>> Correct OR Because, I can do it perfectly if I never give up.Please, You do not give up also to teach me.:)>>Also, please do not give up to teach me.I\'m busy today also.>> CorrectI went to go working place early this morning, >> I went to my working place early this morning and i arrive to my office now. >> Correct OR And I\'m at my office now.I want to go my home. >> I want to go home. But, My boss is not think to go to home.T,T;>> But, I think my boss doesn\'t want me to go home yet.And i am hungry now. >> Correct So i want eating dinner. >> So I want to have my dinner.Please, I want to Boss who say to me \"go home\".T,T;;>> Please, I want my boss to say to me  \" go home\"Hungry.....>> I\'m hungry.Anyway, You will must eating dinner with you like. >> Anyway, I think you\'re having your dinner now.   1.      

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