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Are you having a nice day? I feel like kind of busy ! I'm going to give myself plenty of time to practice English! But My job is so tough and demanding! After work, it seems that it causes my brain to malfunction! In that time , I have no idea. Sometimes I feel ,this is too much for me . But I,m so glad that I can keep on leaving my message in this conner I will do my best, thank you! I will wait for your call. See you then !!

Hello, Martin!^^ This composition corner is really useful right? Keep leaving your messages then. ^^ I can seriously relate to that feeling of having your brain too exhausted to think. It seems that the wheels just stop turning and things stop working up there. ^^ I hope that wouldn’t ever happen while we’re having class though. ^^ --Joanna   Are you having a nice day? >> Correct I feel like kind of busy ! >> I feel kind of busy! I'm going to give myself plenty of time to practice English! >> Correct But My job is so tough and demanding! >> Correct >> But, my job is so tough and demanding! (>>Better) After work, it seems that it causes my brain to malfunction! >> Correct In that time , I have no idea. >> During that time, I can’t think straight. Sometimes I feel ,this is too much for me . >> Correct >> Sometimes I feel this is too much for me. (>>Better) But I,m so glad that I can keep on leaving my message in this conner >> However, I’m so glad that I can keep on leaving my messages in this corner. I will do my best, thank you! >> Correct I will wait for your call. See you then !! >> Correct >> I will wait for your call. See you then! (>>Better)