Hi~~^^
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Hi Kirk!
You did well! Thank you for doing your composition.
I\'m glad that you have great ideas. Especially, about the things which are happening nowadays.
Have a great day!^^
Hm....
I think it is a problem that do not settle today.
>>> I think this is a problem which is difficult to settle nowadays.
People think this problem is easy.
>>CORRECT
It is right!
>>>CORRECT
It is very easy.
>>>CORRECT
Why it is easy, becase people will abide by the law.
>>>Why is it easy? It is easy because people will abide by the law.
Law do not allow buy the drug and buy the medicines that is not a process.
>>> Law doesn\'t allow people to buy drugs or medicines without the doctors\' prescriptions.
Just, people do not abide by the law.
>>>CORRECT
As a result, It is problem that people follow the law or do not follow.
>>As a result, it is a problem if people follow or don\'t follow the law.
If the people of a country know \"drug is bad\", the country would not allow the drug.
>>> If the people in a country know that taking in drugs is bad, the government shouldn\'t allow it.^^ Mission completed!^^
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