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2013-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

hi~i do for a long time homework. Nina had good voice. i am beautiful today. 1. My brother goes to college. 2. I undarstand English. 3. My friends always laughed at my jokes. 4. The weather in California is perfect. 5. Our cats sleap all day. 6. Your dress looks very pretty. 7. My sister walks very quickly. 8. We makes mistakes when we speak English. 9. I am from Italy. 10. My brother ___________________ (have) two dogs.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Wow! Thank you for the compliment! Of course! You are beautiful! I am so happy that you did your homework today. You did a nice job! Please go over the corrections I provided below. Please continue doing your best in class! See you tomorrow!  Teacher Nina   hi~ >> Correct! >> OR: Hi! i do for a long time homework. >> I did my homework after a long time.Nina had good voice. >> Nina has a good voice. i am beautiful today. >> Correct! 1. My brother goes to college.>> Correct! 2. I undarstand English.>> Correct! 3. My friends always laughed at my jokes.>> laugh 4. The weather in California is perfect.>> Correct! 5. Our cats sleap all day.>> Correct!  {Spelling check: sleep ^^)6. Your dress looks very pretty.>> Correct! 7. My sister walks very quickly.>> Correct! 8. We makes mistakes when we speak English.>> make 9. I am from Italy.>> Correct! 10. My brother ___________________ (have) two dogs. >> has

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