^^hi~~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you been go to another country?
I have been go to Taiwan for just travel.
I want go to Austraila for study and learn another culture.
It will be possible?
I am little afraid and worry.
But it will be okay. Arn't you?
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mi [이름]....I also want to go to Australia but my main objective is to work there not to study most especially that they have a good system of government. I have never been to another countries but I hope I will someday. I think it would be a great credit for you if you will study abroad so just go if you have the chance.^^
See you!
Have you been go to another country?
>>>Have you been to another country?
I have been go to Taiwan for just travel.
>>>I have been to Taiwan but just for a trip.
I want go to Austraila for study and learn another culture.
>>>I want to go in Australia to study and to learn their cuture.
It will be possible?
>>>Is it possible?
I am little afraid and worry.
>>>I am a little afraid and worried about that.
But it will be okay. Arn't you?
>>>But things will be ok? What do you think?
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