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2010-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

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Have you been go to another country? I have been go to Taiwan for just travel. I want go to Austraila for study and learn another culture. It will be possible? I am little afraid and worry. But it will be okay. Arn't you?

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mi [이름]....I also want to go to Australia  but my main objective is to work there not to study most especially that they have a good system of government. I have never been to another countries but I hope I will someday. I think it would be a great credit for you if you will study abroad so just go if you have the chance.^^ See you!  Have you been go to another country? >>>Have you been to another country? I have been go to Taiwan for just travel. >>>I have been to Taiwan but just for a trip. I want go to Austraila for study and learn another culture. >>>I want to go in Australia to study and to learn their cuture. It will be possible? >>>Is it possible? I am little afraid and worry. >>>I am a little afraid and worried about that. But it will be okay. Arn't you? >>>But things will be ok? What do you think?

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