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2010-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Verna This is my cover letter. Please check it. Thank you ^^ I'm writing to apply for the position of chemical engineer at ODEC. I'm majoring in chemical engineering at University of Ulsan. For 4 years, I have trained hard to be one of the best chemical engineers in my department. In addition to I have completed 2 courses related to professional engineering. First from 6SIGMA education course, I have acquired the knowlege of efficient manufacturing and quality control process. Second through the Dale carnegie course, I realized the importance of a cmmunication ability to each other. Additionally, I have actively participated in many project at University of Ulsan.

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Hello there Lydia,          Great job on your cover letter. I made few corrections for you to check. Keep it up!  I'll see you later. Take care! -Teacher Verna-  Verna, This is my cover letter. >> Correct Please check it. >>CorrectThank you ^^ >>CorrectI'm writing to apply for the position of chemical engineer at ODEC. >>CorrectI'm majoring in chemical engineering at University of Ulsan. >>I majored Chemical Engineering at the University of Ulsan.For 4 years, I have trained hard to be one of the best chemical engineers in my department. >>CorrectIn addition to I have completed 2 courses related to professional engineering.  >>In addition to that I have completed 2 courses related to professional engineering. First from 6SIGMA education course, I have acquired the knowlege of efficient manufacturing and quality control process. >>CorrectSecond through the Dale carnegie course, I realized the importance of a cmmunication ability to each other. >>Second, through the Dale carnegie course, I realized the importance of the ability to communicate to each each other.Additionally, I have actively participated in many project at University of Ulsan. >>Lastly, I have actively participated in many projects at University of Ulsan.

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