Hi !!
학생이 쓴 원문
Verna This is my cover letter.
Please check it.
Thank you ^^
I'm writing to apply for the position of chemical engineer at ODEC.
I'm majoring in chemical engineering at University of Ulsan.
For 4 years, I have trained hard to be one of the best chemical engineers in my department.
In addition to I have completed 2 courses related to professional engineering.
First from 6SIGMA education course, I have acquired the knowlege of efficient manufacturing and quality control process.
Second through the Dale carnegie course, I realized the importance of a cmmunication ability to each other.
Additionally, I have actively participated in many project at University of Ulsan.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Lydia,
Great job on your cover letter. I made few corrections for you to check. Keep it up!
I'll see you later. Take care!
-Teacher Verna-
Verna, This is my cover letter.
>> Correct
Please check it.
>>CorrectThank you ^^
>>CorrectI'm writing to apply for the position of chemical engineer at ODEC.
>>CorrectI'm majoring in chemical engineering at University of Ulsan.
>>I majored Chemical Engineering at the University of Ulsan.For 4 years, I have trained hard to be one of the best chemical engineers in my department.
>>CorrectIn addition to I have completed 2 courses related to professional engineering.
>>In addition to that I have completed 2 courses related to professional engineering. First from 6SIGMA education course, I have acquired the knowlege of efficient manufacturing and quality control process.
>>CorrectSecond through the Dale carnegie course, I realized the importance of a cmmunication ability to each other.
>>Second, through the Dale carnegie course, I realized the importance of the ability to communicate to each each other.Additionally, I have actively participated in many project at University of Ulsan.
>>Lastly, I have actively participated in many projects at University of Ulsan.
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