Hi~

2010-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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I am very tired. I just came home. My boyfriend apologized me last weekend. Actually, I missed him and I love him now. But I don't trust him continue so I am sad. Do you have any planning at the end of the year? What will you do X-mas^^? I don't have planning now but I will meet my girlfriend.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mi [이름], I thought your boyfriend did not apologize to you.Well, anyway, just a piece of advice, maybe it would be better if you stay friends with your ex-boyfriend. Trust forms the foundation for effective communication so if you don't trust him maybe you would no longer have a good relationship together. And, you deserve someone better.^^

See you Mi [이름].^^

I am very tired.

>>>correct sentence.
I just came home.

>>>correct sentence.
My boyfriend apologized me last weekend.

>>>My boyfriend apologized to me last weekend.
Actually, I missed him and I love him now.

>>>Honestly, I miss him and love him until now.
But I don't trust him continue so I am sad.

>>>>But I dot trust him anymore so I'm confused.
Do you have any planning at the end of the year?

>>>Do you have any plan at the end of the new year?
What will you do X-mas^^?

>>>What are your plans for this coming Christmas?
I don't have planning now but I will meet my girlfriend.

>>>>I don't have any plan as of now but I think I will meet my friends.

 

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