Hi~
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Hi, Mi [이름], I thought your boyfriend did not apologize to you.Well, anyway, just a piece of advice, maybe it would be better if you stay friends with your ex-boyfriend. Trust forms the foundation for effective communication so if you don't trust him maybe you would no longer have a good relationship together. And, you deserve someone better.^^
See you Mi [이름].^^
I am very tired.
>>>correct sentence.
I just came home.
>>>correct sentence.
My boyfriend apologized me last weekend.
>>>My boyfriend apologized to me last weekend.
Actually, I missed him and I love him now.
>>>Honestly, I miss him and love him until now.
But I don't trust him continue so I am sad.
>>>>But I dot trust him anymore so I'm confused.
Do you have any planning at the end of the year?
>>>Do you have any plan at the end of the new year?
What will you do X-mas^^?
>>>What are your plans for this coming Christmas?
I don't have planning now but I will meet my girlfriend.
>>>>I don't have any plan as of now but I think I will meet my friends.
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