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2010-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 tim

학생이 쓴 원문

hi abby i writing for a long time. i'm sorry about yesterday. you've had a lot of call. anyway,I wondering a lot about you . where do you live? you live in where time and time of Korea same?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I'm glad that you are curious about it..? I really want to know you more through the conversations we have in our classes. I guess knowing each other is the best thing that a teacher and a student would do to to be able to have a better relationship. But I appreciate you more in making your compositions cause in this way, you can develop your skills more. Anyway, I'm in the Philippines. I'm actually residing in Baguio City. The time here is different cause Korea is one hour ahead of time. If it is 7 am in Korea, our time in the Philippines is 6 am. I can see that you are very interested in learning yet you need to have more focus. I know that you're trying your best to share your thoughts. Don't be ashamed with your skill, just be confident and speak more. Studying English is really hard but I guess you just have to enjoy it and I know that you뭠l improve a lot if you do constant practice. Anyway, I believe that when you strive more, you can develop your communication skills in no time. Do well on studying. Take care! ^_^ T. ^_^  Here are my corrections for you: I writing for a long time. >> I wasn't able to write compositions for a long time. I'm sorry about yesterday, you've had a lot of call. >> I'm sorry about yesterday, you made lots of calls but I couldn't answer it. anyway, i wondering a lot about you. Where do you live? >> Anyway, I'm wondering about where you are. Where do  you live by the way? You live in where and time of Korea same? >> Is your time same with our time here in Korea?

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