Hi?

2014-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Kathrine? Happy new year! I hope that we have a fun class in this year continously. Do you have a good time with your family? I hope you have a happy time. Your correction for my letter is so useful to me. I will catch up with you. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there^^

Thank you for sending me your letter^^

I also hope but I know that we\'ll have fun in our class this year^^

Anyway, let\'s talk more about this in our class^^

See you tomorrow^^

Have a great day and take care^^

~T.Kathrine

Kathrine?

>>CORRECT^^

>>Kathrine!

Happy new year!
>>CORRECT^^
I hope that we have a fun class in this year continously.
>>I hope that we\'ll have fun in our class this year continuously.

Do you have a good time with your family?

>>Did you have a good time with your family?

I hope you have a happy time.
>>I hope you\'ll have a happy time.

Your correction for my letter is so useful to me.

>>Your correction for my letter is very useful for me.

I will catch up with you.
>>CORRECT^^

Thank you!

>>CORRECT^^

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