Hi~

2010-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

학생이 쓴 원문

Nowadays a lot of meetings. I think maybe the whole month. Korea in the winter is good. People get together and share more. So the winter is cold but I like it^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mi [이름]!...I really want to experience winter season but unfortunately, we only have two seasons here in the Philippines. I think you will be very busy again because you will be having lots of meeting this month.^^Enjoy! See you tomorrow.^^  Nowadays a lot of meetings. >>>Nowadays, we have a lot of meetings.I think maybe the whole month. >>>I think, we will have meetings for the whole month.Korea in the winter is good. >>>Winter season in Korea is good.People get together and share more. >>>People get together and share a lot of things together.So the winter is cold but I like it^^ >>>Winter is so cold but I like it!!

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