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2014-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Julie

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Hi~ I'm enjoying my weekend with lying on my bed and eating snacks! Anyway, the tip you gave me sounds like exciting! But, I can't easily find someone who wants to learn Korean. I have a friend who knows lots' of foreign friends, so I have to ask her to introduce to me. Here's the homework! 1.Sally runs to the park every day. 2.The dogs bark at strangers. 3.Ted and Mary are going to the movies. 4.The game was exciting. 5.They worry too much. 6.She studies every night. 7.Black or white is your choice. 8.That was incredible. 9.Those are pretty shoes. 10.The cat or dog is in the yard. By the way,the grammer is easy to read and correct, but it's so hard to speak not to think. I think that's my big problem now.

강사 첨삭

HELLO!! A wonderful Morning!! I\'m glad that you have enjoyed your weekend. Thank you so much for finding some time to complete your homework. I agree with you that it\' not that easy to speak in English but practice makes perfect. Keep up the good work!

_ALICE_

Hi~ I\'m enjoying my weekend with lying on my bed and eating snacks!

> >Hi! I\'m enjoying my weekend lying on bed and eating snacks.^^
 Anyway, the tip you gave me sounds like exciting! But, I can\'t easily find someone who wants to learn Korean.

>>Anyway, the tip that you gave me sounds exciting, but I can\'t easily find someone who wants to learn Korean.

>> Anyway, the tip you gave me sounds exciting! But, I couldn\'t easily find someone who wants to learn Korean.

 I have a friend who knows lots\' of foreign friends, so I have to ask her to introduce to me.
>>
I have a friend who knows a lot of foreign friends, so I have to ask her to introduce them to me.
1.Sally runs to the park every day.

>>CORRECT
2.The dogs bark at strangers.

>>CORRECT
 3.Ted and Mary are going to the movies.

>>CORRECT
 4.The game was exciting.

>>CORRECT
 5.They worry too much.

>>CORRECT
 6.She studies every night.

>>CORRECT
 7.Black or white is your choice.

>>CORRECT
 8.That was incredible.

>>CORRECT
 9.Those are pretty shoes.

>>CORRECT
 10.The cat or dog is in the yard.
>>CORRECT

By the way,the grammer is easy to read and correct, but it\'s so hard to speak not to think. I think that\'s my big problem now.

>>By the way, grammar is easy to read and correct, but it\'s so hard to speak it out.

>>OR: By the way, grammar is easy to read and correct, but it\'s so hard to speak/articulate in English.

 I think that\'s my big problem now.

>>I think that\'s my big problem now.

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