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Have I ever said you about my dream job? I want to be a Visual Merchandiser. It's about fashion or cosmetic brand store's display to increase sales. So, in the next five year's, my goals are to get my knowledge and ability adapted to that job. To do that, I enrolled a academy for a year course. After that course, I have to go back to my school but I'll do my best to acheive my goals. And then, I must be a great Visual Merchanfiser someday!

Hello [이름]! You didn\'t tell me about your dream job. WOW. That job is definitely interesting. I am glad that you are doing your best to achieve your goals. Aja! :) By the way, I have some corrections for your work. Have a great day!^^ ~Teacher Alice Have I ever said you about my dream job? >> Have I ever told you about my dream job? I want to be a Visual Merchandiser. >> I want to be a visual merchandiser. It\'s about fashion or cosmetic brand store\'s display to increase sales. >> A visual merchadiser works at the fashion or cosmetic brand stores to increase their sales. So, in the next five year\'s, my goals are to get my knowledge and ability adapted to that job. >> So, in the next five years, my goals are to gain knowledge and to adapt the skills for that job.   To do that, I enrolled a academy for a year course. >> To achieve that, I enrolled in an academy for a year course. >> To achieve that, I enrolled in an academy for a one- year course. After that course, I have to go back to my school but I\'ll do my best to acheive my goals. >> After that course, I have to go back to my school but I\'ll do my best to achieve my goals. And then, I must be a great Visual Merchanfiser someday! >> And then, I must be a great visual merchandiser someday!