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I think the most important thing to be successful is a enthusiasm for my own dream. If someone forces me to work for something I am totally not intersted in, that could be killing me! Howvever, if I can work for something I 've draamed about, that could give me a great passion. I believe the success is to get a job I really like. So, if I have a conviction and enthusiasm for my dream, it can lead me to success.
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Hello again [이름][이름]!
Thank you for consistently doing your homework.
I agree that in order to become successful in something, you need enthusiasm and conviction. I am so sure you can reach your dreams.
Dream. Believe. Make it happen.
Call you again tomorrow!^^
~Teacher Alice
I think the most important thing to be successful is a enthusiasm for my own dream.
>> I think the most important thing to be successful is having enthusiasm for my own dream.
>> I think the most important thing to be successful is being enthusiastic in reaching my dream.
If someone forces me to work for something I am totally not intersted in, that could be killing me!
>> If someone forces me to work for something I am not totally interested in, that could be killing me!
>> If someone forces me to work on something I am not totally interested in, that could be killing me!
Howvever, if I can work for something I \'ve draamed about, that could give me a great passion.
>> However, if I can work for something I\'ve dreamed about, that could give me great passion.
>> However, if I can work on something I\'ve dreamed about, that could give me great passion.
I believe the success is to get a job I really like.
>> I believe that being successful is to get a job I really like.
So, if I have a conviction and enthusiasm for my dream, it can lead me to success.
>> So if I have conviction and enthusiasm for my dream, it can lead me to success.
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