Hi!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Jenny!
I'm sorry but I couldn't take today's class.
Maybe it's the last absent this year.
I have checked your advice and I receive daily English newspaper.
I'll start my study with a new plan from the next week.
See you Friday ! Thank you for caring me ! Bye !!
강사 첨삭
JK ,
Thank you so much for the heads up! My manager informed me about that earlier. I’m sad but I know that there are lots of things to do these days. I am happy to know that you heeded my advice. I can’t wait to talk with you on Friday!
-- Jenny --
Hi, Jenny!
>>Correct.I'm sorry but I couldn't take today's class.
>> Correct.
>> I'm sorry but I can’t attend the class today.
Maybe it's the last absent this year.
>>Maybe it’s my last absence for this year.I have checked your advice and I receive daily English newspaper.
>>I heeded your advice and I am starting to read the English newspaper daily.I'll start my study with a new plan from the next week.
>>Correct.See you Friday ! Thank you for caring me ! Bye !!
>>See you on Friday! Thank you for caring for me. Bye!
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