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hi. Thecher. Im grace. Its a first time to wright somthing in here. So im very interesting! Im in the way home by subway. I feel so bed these days because of my work stress. Im in a oversee sales department so i have to email in english and l recived email in english. Its ok...but lm hard to use new word that use in Apparel company. im very tired now... Its over 10pm. I almost arrived home. Im going to bed after eating somthing. Good night.

Hello there, Grace!! I\'m very happy that you took some time to write a composition for me. ^_^ I appreciate it! I understand your situation, that\'s normal, sweetie. So, I would just advice you to take a lot of rest. You will need that. And for your work. I know you can do it. Just believe in yourself. Aja! ^_^ That yould be all, sweetie. I\'ll see you tomorrow! Again, thank you so much! You may now take a rest. Good night! :* ~Teacher May   Here are your corrections, dear. I would appreciate if you take some time to read it:   hi. Thecher. Im grace. >> Hi, Teacher! I\'m Grace. >>OR: Hi, Teacher! This is [Name]. Its a first time to wright somthing in here. >> It\'s my first time to write something in here. So im very interesting! Im in the way home by subway. >> So I\'m very excited! I\'m taking the subway on my way home. I feel so bed these days because of my work stress. >> I feel so bad these days because of my work. Im in a oversee sales department so i have to email in english and l recived email in english. >> I work as an overseas sales department, so I have to send an email in English and I also recieved an email in English. Its ok...but lm hard to use new word that use in Apparel company. im very tired now... >> It\'s okay, but it\'s hard to use a new word in an apparel company. I\'m very tired now. Its over 10pm. I almost arrived home. Im going to bed after eating somthing. Good night. >> It\'s almost 10 o\'clock in the evening. I just arrived home. I\'m going to bed after eating my dinner. Good night!