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2010-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Please check these sentences whether right or not when I call someone. 1. He works outside of the office today, so you should contact his cell phone. Do you konw his cell phone's number? I'll tell you the number. 2. He's not in at the moment. Could you call him after twewnty minutes?

강사 첨삭

Hello Irene, The second sentence is correct, but the first one needs some correction. Talk to you later. Take care! T. RJ Here are the corrections: Please check these sentences whether right or not when I call someone.>>Please check these sentences whether they are  right or not when I'm talking to someone on the phone.1. He works outside of the office today, so you should contact his cell phone. Do you konw his cell phone's number?I'll tell you the number. >>He is working outside of the office today, so please contact him through his cell phone. Do you want his cell phone number? I'll give it to you.2. He's not in at the moment.Could you call him after twewnty minutes? >>CORRECT

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