Hi^^
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Hello there,
Thank you for your essay. It is really a good practice for you to write your thoughts and opinions about a certain topic for you to express what you want to say.
It is really difficult to please everybody, but we need to build a healthy relationship with our friends.
Have a great day!
T.Alice^^
I think the true friendship is to understand each other.
>>I think, true relationship is to understand each other.
It is very hard to understand what they\'ve done and why they\'re acting like that unquestioningly.
>>It is very hard to understand what they\'ve done and why they\'re acting like that without any question.
People usually tend to find out one person\'s flaw firstly, and it\'s really difficult not to have dissatisfaction about that.
>>People tend to find people\'s flaws easily; it\'s really difficult not to be satisfied with it.
However, if I try, I could understand my friends theirslf.
>>However, if I try, I could understand my friends completely.^^
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