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2014-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Well, it's a little bit difficult topic to me, because I am weak at political events. As far as I know, it was very careful to refer North Korea's things in 70's. Korea is the only divided nation in the world, and North Korea was known as a the best dangerous nation for our people. So, it was cautious to talk about them.

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Well, it\'s a little bit difficult topic to me, because I am weak at political events.

>>correct

As far as I know, it was very careful to refer North Korea\'s things in 70\'s.

>>correct

Korea is the only divided nation in the world, and North Korea was known as a the best dangerous nation for our people.

>>Korea is the only divided nation in the world, and North Korea was known as a the most dangerous nation for our people.

So, it was cautious to talk about them.

>>correct

OR: So we have to be cautious in talking to them.

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