Hi!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!^.^
Thank you for doing your homework and about last Friday\'s class, apology accepted!^.^
I hope you can find time to check the corrections I made and also the alternative
sentences that I put to make your sentences more meaningful.
If you have further questions, feel free to ask me in class!
See you then!
~~T. Lexi~~
Teacher! First of all, I\'m really sorry about the missing call.
>>Teacher, first of all, I am really sorry for missing your phone call.
I was having a get- together dinner with my academy\'s class mates. T.T
>>Correct.
or>>I had a get together with my class mates in my academy.
I came to home at eleven, so I couldn\'t answer the call on the Friday.
>>I came home at eleven so I couldn\'t answer your call last Friday.
Nevertheless thank you for giving the homework and here\'s my homework!
>>Correct.
I totally agree that teacher should be paid according their ability.
>>I total agree that a teacher should be paid according to their ability.
If their ability is good, student could get a great academic achieve.
>>If their ability is good, a student can get a great academic achievement.
So, the payment can\'t be same between a competent teacher and an incompetent teacher.
>>So, the payment will not be the same between a competent and an incompetent teacher.
Above all, by making a difference about paying system, we can encourage teachers to improve their ability.
>>Above all, by making a difference in the payment/salary system, we can encourage/motivate teachers to improve their ability.
And I believe that\'s the reason why the society have to be fair.
>>And I believe that it\'s the reason that the society has to be fair.
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