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People who spend time with one or two friends can make deep and close relationship. In contrast, people who spend time with a large number of friends can make broad and numerous relaionship. I am the person who spend my time with three or four friends. I think I'm a type of a few friends-relationship. I don't like to be with many people. That situation usually takes my energy, but it can be fun and beneficial sometimes. However, to be with the few friends who really understand and care of me gives my happy feeing!
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Hi my dear!
You got remarkable ideas tonight. Thanks for sharing bits of information about yourself.
I seem to see myself in you.
Anyway, have a great night!
T. Lexi
People who spend time with one or two friends can make deep and close relationship.
>>Correct :)
In contrast, people who spend time with a large number of friends can make broad and numerous relaionship.
>>Correct :) (spelling check - relationship)
I am the person who spend my time with three or four friends.
>>Correct :)
I think I\'m a type of a few friends-relationship.
>>I think I\'m a type of person who can make few friends.
I don\'t like to be with many people.
>>Correct :)
That situation usually takes my energy, but it can be fun and beneficial sometimes.
>>Correct :)
However, to be with the few friends who really understand and care of me gives my happy feeing!
>>Correct :) (spelling check - feeling)
>>OR: However, to be with few friends who can really understand and care for me gives me a happy feeling!
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