Hi~^^

2014-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

I think to wear a school uniforms is kind of a good idea. Because it's always problem to pick which clothes do I wear to me. I often miss that time when I don't have any trouble for the clothes. School uniform is a privilege.

강사 첨삭

Hi sweetie!
I am happy that you see it that way. I  for one, has difficulty in choosing  clothes to wear.
And it is time consuming so having a prescribe uniform is an easier option.
Thanks for sending this in. See you later! ^^
Teacher Lexi ~~
 

I think to wear a school uniforms is kind of a good idea.
>>I think to wear a school uniform is a good idea.
Because it\'s always problem to pick which clothes do I wear to me.
>>Because it\'s always a problem to pick which clothes do I need to wear.
I often miss that time when I don\'t have any trouble for the clothes.
>>I often miss the time when I don\'t have any trouble choosing my clothes.
>>OR: I often have trouble choosing my clothes.
School uniform is a privilege.
>>Correct ^^

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