Hi!

2014-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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I am worried about that two type of theft. But, I don't stop using online shopping. It's really comfortable to me. The one thing that I do for the impormation protection is to use desktop when I charge something. As a result, I don't have any experience for the theft accident. HAHAHA!

강사 첨삭

Hello there!^,^

Thank you for doing your homework.

Please check the corrections that I made.

If you have questions, feel free to ask me during class time.

It\'s a very interesting topic so I would like to ask more, too!^.^

See you then!~

~~T. Lexi~~

I am worried about that two type of theft.

>>I am worried about the two types of theft.

But, I don\'t stop using online shopping.

>>Correct.

or>>I still do online shopping.

It\'s really comfortable to me.

>>It\'s really comfortable for me.

The one thing that I do for the impormation protection is to use desktop when I charge something.

>>One thing that I do to protect my information is to use my desktop when I charge [change] something.

As a result, I don\'t have any experience for the theft accident. HAHAHA!

>>As a result, I haven\'t experienced theft situations yet.^^

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