Hi!
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강사 첨삭
Hello there!^,^
Thank you for doing your homework.
Please check the corrections that I made.
If you have questions, feel free to ask me during class time.
It\'s a very interesting topic so I would like to ask more, too!^.^
See you then!~
~~T. Lexi~~
I am worried about that two type of theft.
>>I am worried about the two types of theft.
But, I don\'t stop using online shopping.
>>Correct.
or>>I still do online shopping.
It\'s really comfortable to me.
>>It\'s really comfortable for me.
The one thing that I do for the impormation protection is to use desktop when I charge something.
>>One thing that I do to protect my information is to use my desktop when I charge [change] something.
As a result, I don\'t have any experience for the theft accident. HAHAHA!
>>As a result, I haven\'t experienced theft situations yet.^^
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