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Hello there my dear [이름]!

I\'m so sorry to hear about what happened to your dog.

Let\'s just hope that she\'ll be able to be with you for a longer time.

It may be hard for you and your family if she will die, but that is life. We don\'t control our lives.

Just think of the good memories that you shared with her.

Anyway, I made some correction with your sentences.

I hope you\'ll review them

Good night!

See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee

I couldn\'t answer your call yesterday because I took medication and fell a sleep.:P

>>I couldn\'t answer your call yesterday because I took a medication and fell asleep.:P
I take cold every year at this time.

>>I get colds every spring season.

Anyway, I have a bad news.

>>Correct!

Although I haven\'t talked about my dog to you, I have a 11-year old dog which is my best friend sicne I was 10. she has been always at my elbow.

>>Although I haven\'t talked about my dog to you, I have an 11 year old dog which I consider as my best friend since I was 10. She has been always been in my arms.

But I guess she\'ll be gone by renal failure.
>>But I guess she\'ll be gone due to renal failure.

Now she is in animal hospital.

>>Now she is in an animal hospital.

Tow days have passed since she was taken to there.

>>Two days have passed since she was taken there.

I can\'t get rid of the moment that she looked at me with such pitiful eyes which is filled fears when I leave her alone.

>>I can\'t get rid of the moment when she looked at me with such pitiful and teary eyes when I left her alone.

I really miss her and I hope she\'ll be always with me. :(

>>I really miss her and I hope she\'ll always be with me.:(

If she dies, It\'ll be really hard time to our family.

>>If she dies, it\'ll be really hard for our family.

>>Or: If she dies, it\'ll be a really hard time for our family.