Hi
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강사 첨삭
Hi!
I feel sorry about the situation of your dog.
Thank you for sharing your story and what you feel towards your lovely pet.
The idea of your composition is clear and I love it. Kindly go over some of my corrections in the construction of your sentences.
Take care always and get well soon after your surgery!
Teacher Shanee ^^
After your class, vet called us and he said he has nothing to do for my dog.
>> The veterinarian called after our class. He said, he can no longer help my dog.
Her condition was serious and It was worse than we thought.
>> The condition was serious and getting worse than we thought.
He said she\'ll die soon and we should ready for this.
>> He said my dog will soon die and we should get ready for this.
During the conversation, he seemed like he was recommending her to put to sleep.
>> During our conversation, seemingly he was recommending to put my dog to sleep.
Ofcourse If she feels pain we should do that, but not now.
>> Of course we can do that considering her condition, but not now.
And unfortunatliy, I should enter theokey hopital for a surgery and maybe I should stay there from a week to two weeks.
>> Unfortunately, I was scheduled for a surgery and I need to stay in the hospital for one to two weeks.
Vet said she won\'t be alive for a long time like that.
>> The veterinarian said that my dog will not be alive for too long.
I won\'t be albe to be by her side when she pass away.
>> I would not be there on her side when she passes away.
It makes me frustrating.
>> I will be frustrated.
ps.It seems that I won\'t be able to have lessons on Thursday and Friday cuz of surgery.
>> P.S. It seems that I won\'t be able to have our lessons on Thursday and Friday because of my surgery.
I\'ll get better after that days. :)
>> I will get better after those days. :)
See you soon!
>> Correct
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