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I hope you will be ok. Come back our class!! I think most people prefer working for someone else. There are some reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, self-employed has a risk. Because if I run a business, I have to consider many things such as economy, oil cost and exchange money. If I fail to consider that, my company will bankrupt. Secondly, working for someone else has security. Yon can get a money every month and you don't neet to worry abour around company situation. You just work security.

Hi, I뭠l be fine don뭪 worry. You have great opinions about becoming an enterprenuer. Its good that you consider a lot of things first before starting a new plan for example. See you and thank you for composition.   I hope you will be ok. >>>correct sentenceCome back our class!! >>>Come back to our class.I think most people prefer working for someone else. >>>correct sentenceThere are some reasons to support my opinion. >>>correct sentenceFirstly, self-employed has a risk. >>>correct sentence Because if I run a business, I have to consider many things such as economy, oil cost and exchange money. >>>correct sentence If I fail to consider that, my company will bankrupt. >>>If I fail to consider that, my company goes bankrupt.Secondly, working for someone else has security. >>>correct sentence Yon can get a money every month and you don't neet to worry abour around company situation. >>>You can get money every month and you don뭪 need to worry about your company뭩 situation.(be careful with your spelling) You just work security. >>>You just have to work with security.