Hi~
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to go to a small cafe near by my home. Tha cafe is calm, and the music is always sweet. I love to go that place on weekends. I do my homeworks, and drink a cup of delicious coffee.
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Hi [이름]!
Happy Tuesday!
You really don\'t disappoint me!
Very good for doing your homework!
Just be careful with some grammar rules.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
I like to go to a small cafe near by my home.
>> CORRECT! (The pattern like + to base-verb is for future action, and the pattern like + verb-ing is for usual action.)
>> OR: I like going to a small cafe near my home.
Tha cafe is calm, and the music is always sweet.
>> The cafe has a calm atmosphere, and the music is always sweet. (Calm is used to describe a person and a place.)
>> OR: The cafe has a calm ambiance, and the music there is always sweet.
I love to go that place on weekends.
>> I love going to that place on weekends.
I do my homeworks, and drink a cup of delicious coffee.
>> I do my homework and drink a cup of delicious coffee. (The word homework is uncountable, so we can\'t put \"s\" after.)
>> OR: I do my homework on different subjects and drink a cup of delicious coffee.
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