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2011-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Hi, it was nice meeting you again. I think that you always give me high score than last teacher. Your moto must be 'Praise make an whale could dance.' ;) Isn't it? Anyway I would like to thank you about your class. I have to study hard because of you. Ha.. Actually, I got a call from China today. To be honest I was embarassed a litle. But I could tell him what I want to speak in English. Of course it was not enough. Most important thing is that I could tell at least. Thank you again, and enjoy your weekend.

강사 첨삭

It was nice to talk with you again!

Well, I am just giving what you deserve. I just hope you prove yourself more. ^-^

I would really appreciate if you study harder. Haha! Enjoy your weekend too! 

Hi, it was nice meeting you again.

>>correct!
I think that you always give me high score than last teacher.

>>I think you give higher scores than my last teacher.
Your moto must be 'Praise make an whale could dance.' ;) Isn't it?

>>Your motto must be, “Praise make a whale dance” ^-^v Isn't it?
Anyway I would like to thank you about your class.

>>Anyway I would like to thank you for our class.
I have to study hard because of you. Ha..

>>correct!
Actually, I got a call from China today.

>>correct!

To be honest I was embarassed a litle.

>> To be honest I was embarrassed a little. (just your spelling^-^)

But I could tell him what I want to speak in English.

>>But I could tell him that I want to speak in English.
Of course it was not enough. Most important thing is that I could tell at least.

>> Of course it was not enough but the most important thing is that I could tell at least.

Thank you again, and enjoy your weekend.

>> Thank you again and enjoy your weekend. (just no need for the comma (,) ^-^v

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