Hi~
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Hi [이름]!
Happy Thursday!
Wow~~~
You surely like your sneakers!
It seems like you also like sports.
Anyway, see you in class!
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
I cherish my ADIDAS sneakers!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I cherish my pair of ADIDAS sneakers the most.
Its model name is gazelle original, and the color is light olive green.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: It\'s a Gazelle Original model, and it has a light olive green color.
I bought this last month.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I just bought it last month.
It is very comfortable for feet.
>> It is comfortable for my feet.
I like the sneakers because of the color.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I like my sneakers because of the color.
It can be matched with many fashion style!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: It can be matched with different clothes.
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