Hi~

I see a movie recently, and it was "Amazing Spiderman". It's a new version of spiderman. This movie was released on 2012. I didn't watch this movie that time, but when I saw the old version of spiderman, I wanted to see the new version. "Amazing Spiderman" was really great, because the actors was fresh and pretty. Their act was pretty good. I am really expecting the follow-up movie.

Hi [이름]!

I want to give a big smile to you!

I envy you because I haven\'t watch the latest version of \"The Amazing Spider-man\".

I heard that the actors were really good.

The cinematography was also perfect.

By the way, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below.

Anyway, enjoy your day tomorrow or later! Hahaha!

See you!

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

I see a movie recently, and it was \"Amazing Spiderman\".

>> I saw a movie recently, and it was \"The Amazing Spider-man\". (Spelling)

>> OR: I have recently seen a movie, and its title is \"The Amazing Spider-man\".

It\'s a new version of spiderman.

>> It\'s a new version of Spider-man. (Spelling)

This movie was released on 2012.

>> This movie was released in 2012. (Preposition: We use \"in\" for nonspecific times during a day, a month, a season, or a year. We use \"on\" to designate days and dates.)

I didn\'t watch this movie that time, but when I saw the old version of spiderman, I wanted to see the new version.

>> I didn\'t watch this movie that time, but when I saw the old version of Spider-man, I wanted to see the latest version of it. (Spelling)

\"Amazing Spiderman\" was really great, because the actors was fresh and pretty.

>> \"The Amazing Spider-man\" was really great, because the actors were fresh and pretty. (Spelling and Grammar: Plural subject should have a plural verb.)

Their act was pretty good.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Their performance was pretty good.

I am really expecting the follow-up movie.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I am really looking forward to  the next version of the movie.