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I didn't have class last Friday because I did have a dinner with my co-workers.They are previous co-workers when I worked part-time.
We ate and drunk. We had a chat. I had a great time.
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Thank you for sending me reason why you’re absent last Friday. Anyway here are your grammar corrections. Please study all of it at home.
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I didn't have class last Friday because I did have a dinner with my co-workers.
>> I didn't have class last Friday because we ate dinner with my co-workers.
They are previous co-workers when I worked part-time.
>> They are my co-workers when I was just working as part-time.
We ate and drunk. We had a chat. I had a great time.
>> We ate, drunk and enjoyed chatting with each other at that time. We had a lot of fun.
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