Hi~
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Monday!
Don\'t worry about last Fridays.
I was just worried.
I know that you won\'t be absent in our class without any good reason.
I really understand.
It is good because you explained why you were absent.
By the way, your composition is really funny.
I can imagine what happened to you.
Anyway, it is a great composition.
Keep it up!
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Teacher Paula, I\'m sorry about last friday! T.T
>> Teacher Paula, I\'m sorry about last Friday! T.T
It was hard to come home early because that day was my friend\'s birthday.
>> It was hard to come home early, because that day was my friend\'s birthday.I will be pleasure if you understand my situation and here\'s my homework!
>> I will be pleased if you understand my situation, and here\'s my homework!
I was really embarrassed when I slipped on ice. Because my socks were taken off as well as my shoes!
>> I was really embarrassed when I slipped on ice, because my socks were taken off as well as my shoes!
I was expected to have a bigger feet as a kid so my mom bought me a very big shoes.
>> I was expected to have bigger feet as a kid so my mom bought me a pair of very big shoes.
That day was so emarrasing I can\'t forget untill now.
>> That day was so embarrassing. I can\'t forget it until now.
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