Hi~

2014-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Teacher Paula, I'm sorry about last friday! T.T It was hard to come home early because that day was my friend's birthday. I will be pleasure if you understand my situation and here's my homework! I was really embarrassed when I slipped on ice. Because my socks were taken off as well as my shoes! I was expected to have a bigger feet as a kid so my mom bought me a very big shoes. That day was so emarrasing I can't forget untill now.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Happy Monday!

 

Don\'t worry about last Fridays.

I was just worried.

I know that you won\'t be absent in our class without any good reason.

I really understand.

It is good because you explained why you were absent.

 

By the way, your composition is really funny.

I can imagine what happened to you.

 

Anyway, it is a great composition.

Keep it up!

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

Teacher Paula, I\'m sorry about last friday! T.T

>> Teacher Paula, I\'m sorry about last Friday! T.T

It was hard to come home early because that day was my friend\'s birthday.

>> It was hard to come home early, because that day was my friend\'s birthday.

I will be pleasure if you understand my situation and here\'s my homework!
>> I will be pleased if you understand my situation, and here\'s my homework!
I was really embarrassed when I slipped on ice.
Because my socks were taken off as well as my shoes!

>> I was really embarrassed when I slipped on ice, because my socks were taken off as well as my shoes!

I was expected to have a bigger feet as a kid so my mom bought me a very big shoes.

>> I was expected to have bigger feet as a kid so my mom bought me a pair of very big shoes.

That day was so emarrasing I can\'t forget untill now.

>> That day was so embarrassing. I can\'t forget it until now.

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