Hi~^^
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l choose a historical person as a student who love history. I think King Sejong is an important person for our country. He made korean letters and other great invention. Most importantly, He was a imitable leader.He liked to held a discussion. He listened opposit opinion very well, and excepted that. He made people to be promoted regardless status. King Sejong is inspirationg current people, and now he is drawn at korea's paper money.
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Hi [이름]!
Happy Wednesday!
Wow!
You really know your history.
You are the only student who chose King Sejong as the most important person in your country.
Very good!
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
l choose a historical person as a student who love history.
>> ... as a student who loves history.
I think King Sejong is an important person for our country.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: ... in our country.
>> OR: ... for Koreans.
He made korean letters and other great invention.
>> He made Korean alphabet and other great inventions.
Most importantly, He was a imitable leader.
>> Most importantly, he was an imittable leader.
He liked to held a discussion.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: He liked to help in a discussion.
He listened opposit opinion very well, and excepted that.
>> He listened to opposite opinions very well and excepted them.
He made people to be promoted regardless status.
>> He made people to be promoted regardless of their status in the society.
King Sejong is inspirationg current people, and now he is drawn at korea\'s paper money.
>> King Sejong is an inspiration to current people, and he is now drawn at Korea\'s monetary.
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