Hi~

Hi [이름]!

Happy Friday!

Wow!

You really amaze me.

You are really an outstanding student.

I know that you can really reach your goals in life.

You have lasting perseverance or dedication.

That is really good!

I wish you all the best.

I also hope for your success in the path your are taking.

Keep on believing in yourself!

Keep your positive mind!

Anyway, I had fun reading your composition.

However, there are some mistakes you need to see.

Review articles and prepositions.

That\'s all!

Have a great time!

See you soon!

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Last semester, I won a scholarship because I got first place.

>> Last semester, I won a scholarship, because I got the first place.

It was really great success.

>> It was a really great success.

I tried to be got an A score, and I studied hard.

>> I tried to get A score, and I studied hard.

I was happy when the resoultion came out.

>> I was happy when the result came out.

It was like the reward for my effort.

>> CORRECT!

Anyway, this experience is my best success, and it can lead another success!

>> Anyway, this experience is my best success, and it can lead to another success!