Hi~ :)
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I like to wear boyish style. It's easy to mix each of clothes and boyish stlye suit my stature.(Because I'm a little bit tall) And I don't use accessary like necklace, ring and hairband, so boyish style is really good to use my items. However, I have to be used to wear formal dress, becasue I'm getting older.
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Hi [이름]!
Wonderful Wednesday!
I had a very awesome weekend.
My family and I went to my father\'s hometown.
We went there to see our grandmother who is already 94 years old.
Last month that my parents went there, our grandmother wanted to see her grandchildren, so we went there to grant her wish.
How about you?
By the way, it was great to check your composition again.
Very good!
Your composition is almost perfect.
However, be careful with some mistakes.
Anyway, see you very soon!
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
I like to wear boyish style.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s easy to mix each of clothes and boyish stlye suit my stature. (Because I\'m a little bit tall)
>> It\'s easy to mix-and-match some clothes, and boyish style suits my stature, since I\'m a little bit tall.
And I don\'t use accessary like necklace, ring and hairband, so boyish style is really good to use my items.
>> In addition, I don\'t use any accessories like necklace, ring and hairband, so boyish is really good for me.
However, I have to be used to wear formal dress, becasue I\'m getting older.
>> However, I have to be used to wear formal clothes, because I\'m getting older.
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