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For this semester's business English class,
I've decided to use "The book Power of Habit" written by Charles, as a textbook.
The book had been on "The New York Times bestsellers list" for more than 60 weeks.
I became interested in this book because It was written by a journalist.
*Charles who has completed(=graduated) Yale University and Harvard Business School
is a reporter who was awarded Pulitzer Prize.*
Since I haven't read the book prior to this semester,
I wanted to learn the writing know-how as well.
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Hi there Conner^^
Thank you for sending your homework.^^
Your book of choice is very interesting. I heard about it from my friend and
I too is interested about that book. I\'m waiting for her to finish that book so
I could borrow it.
You did really well on your sentences.
Keep it up!
Take care^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
For this semester\'s business English class,I\'ve decided to use \"The book Power of Habit\" written by Charles, as a textbook.>> CORRECT
OR> I decided to use the book \"The book Power of Habit\" by Charles Duhigg as my textbook for this semester.
The book had been on \"The New York Times bestsellers list\" for more than 60 weeks.
>> CORRECT
OR> It had been included in the \"The New York Times bestsellers list\" for six weeks.I became interested in this book because It was written by a journalist.>> CORRECT
OR> It caught my interest because it was by a journlist.
*Charles who has completed(=graduated) Yale University and Harvard Business Schoolis a reporter who was awarded Pulitzer Prize.*>> Charles Duhigg who graduated from Yale University and Harvard Business Schoolis a reporter who was awarded a Pulitzer Prize.Since I haven\'t read the book prior to this semester,I wanted to learn the writing know-how as well.
>> Since I haven\'t read the book prior to this semester,I wanted to learn the know-how on his writing as well.
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