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i'm stuck in home all day long :( I can't go out easliy because I had a surgery on my feet.
Doctor called this disease by bunion. Actually Bunion mainly occurs in middle aged women because of high heels. But I'm just a 22 years girl so I guess it's a GENETIC PROBLEM. I hard that my great aunt also has a bunion. The surgery was really hurt and hospital life was awful. :( Unfortunatliy, I have one more foot to have a surgery.
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Hello there my dear!
Cheer up!
I know your situation is not easy. Probably it\'s very uncomfortable to move with your foot in that kind of condition.
But just be patient. It will heal soon. And when that time comes, you could move into different places conveniently and do the things that you long to do comfortable.
Get well soon!
~Teacher Shanee
i\'m stuck in home all day long :(
>>I\'m stuck at home all day long.:(
I can\'t go out easliy because I had a surgery on my feet.
>>Correct!
Doctor called this disease by bunion.
>>Doctor call this disease bunion.
Actually Bunion mainly occurs in middle aged women because of high heels.
>>Correct! (bunion)
But I\'m just a 22 years girl so I guess it\'s a GENETIC PROBLEM.
>>But I\'m just a 22 year old lady so I guess it\'s a genetic problem.
I hard that my great aunt also has a bunion.
>>Correct! (heard)
The surgery was really hurt and hospital life was awful. :(
>>The surgery was really painful and the hospital was awful.:(
Unfortunatliy, I have one more foot to have a surgery.
>>Unfortunately, my other foot needs to have a surgery.
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