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There was a teacher who gives a great effect to me. He was a painting teacher, and he studied a psycology as well. So, when he saw my picture, he always explain my character through that picture. It was really interesting, and that explanation was helpful to improve my strange character. He was a good teacher, so I visit his studio every teacher's day.

Hi [이름]! Happy Wednesday!   Teachers can really make great effects in our lives. They are our second parents. In my case, I consider my mom as the teacher who gives a great effect to me. She has taught me many things that I should know anout life.   By the way, check the corrections and suggestions for your composition. As a whole, you are still doing good. Just keep on expressing yourself.   Anyway, see you very soon!   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     There was a teacher who gives a great effect to me. >> There is a teacher who gave a great effect to me. He was a painting teacher, and he studied a psycology as well. >> He was an art teacher, and he studied Psychology as well. So, when he saw my picture, he always explain my character through that picture. >> Therefore, when he saw my picture, he always explains my character through that picture. It was really interesting, and that explanation was helpful to improve my strange character. >> CORRECT! He was a good teacher, so I visit his studio every teacher\'s day. >> He was a good teacher, so I visit his studio every Teacher\'s Day.