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Hello [이름]! Thank you for sharing your feelings and concerns with me.
Why do you feel that way? What is your job like?
Well, your manager is right. I hope you would reconsider staying there for a while. Try to get to know about your job first and maybe eventually you’ll like it. It’s not easy getting along with a new job that easily especially if it’s not your dream job, it might take a while to get used to it. But if you really don’t like it then you could leave. Tell me about it in our class ok?
Hi!
>> Correct!
I'm [이름].
>> This is [이름].
Now,I'm worrying about my future so I'm getting a headache.
>> I’m having a headache, because I worry about my future.
>> I’m worried about my future and it’s giving me a headache.
I just have started my job but I want to stop this job.
>> I have just started working but already I want to stop.
It is different from my dream and It thrawed with me.
>> Correct!
I told my manager that I want to stop this job.
>> Correct!
>> I told my manager that I want to resign.
He told me "Please reconsider."
>> Correct!
>> BUT he SAID "Please reconsider."
I'm very concerned about it.
>> Correct!
Bye, see you tonight.
>> Correct!
Thank you.
>> Correct!
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