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2011-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi! I'm [이름]. Now,I'm worrying about my future so I'm getting a headache. I just have started my job but I want to stop this job. It is different from my dream and It thrawed with me. I told my manager that I want to stop this job. He told me "Please reconsider." I'm very concerned about it. uu Bye, see you tonight. Thank you.

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Hello [이름]! Thank you for sharing your feelings and concerns with me.

Why do you feel that way? What is your job like?

Well, your manager is right. I hope you would reconsider staying there for a while. Try to get to know about your job first and maybe eventually you’ll like it. It’s not easy getting along with a new job that easily especially if it’s not your dream job, it might take a while to get used to it. But if you really don’t like it then you could leave. Tell me about it in our class ok?

 Hi!

>> Correct!

I'm [이름].

>> This is [이름].

Now,I'm worrying about my future so I'm getting a headache.

>> I’m having a headache, because I worry about my future.

>> I’m worried about my future and it’s giving me a headache.

I just have started my job but I want to stop this job.

>> I have just started working but already I want to stop.

It is different from my dream and It thrawed with me.
>> Correct!

 I told my manager that I want to stop this job.

>> Correct!

>> I told my manager that I want to resign.

 He told me "Please reconsider."

>> Correct!

>> BUT he SAID "Please reconsider."

 I'm very concerned about it.

>> Correct!
Bye, see you tonight.

>> Correct!

Thank you.

>> Correct!

 

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