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2014-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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I know one person who is really intelligent. She is one of my classmates in the academy. She graduated the university already. I did many projects with her, and I think she is good at planning the project. She has knowledge about social stream. I learn the way to do projects from her. She is great teacher to me!

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Hi [이름]! Happy Monday!   It\'s been a long time not hearing your voice. Wow ~~~ What a composition you have! I really like it. It is almost perfect. Keep it up!   Anyway, I miss you! See you soon! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     I know one person who is really intelligent. >> CORRECT! She is one of my classmates in the academy. >> CORRECT! She graduated the university already. >> She graduated university already. I did many projects with her, and I think she is good at planning the project. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I did a lot of projects with her, and I think she is good at planning for projects. She has knowledge about social stream. >> CORRECT! I learn the way to do projects from her. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I learn how to make projects from her. She is great teacher to me! >> She is a great teacher to me! >> OR: She is a great teacher for me!

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