Hi~
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I know one person who is really intelligent. She is one of my classmates in the academy. She graduated the university already. I did many projects with her, and I think she is good at planning the project. She has knowledge about social stream. I learn the way to do projects from her. She is great teacher to me!
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Hi [이름]!
Happy Monday!
It\'s been a long time not hearing your voice.
Wow ~~~
What a composition you have!
I really like it.
It is almost perfect.
Keep it up!
Anyway, I miss you!
See you soon! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
I know one person who is really intelligent.
>> CORRECT!
She is one of my classmates in the academy.
>> CORRECT!
She graduated the university already.
>> She graduated university already.
I did many projects with her, and I think she is good at planning the project.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I did a lot of projects with her, and I think she is good at planning for projects.
She has knowledge about social stream.
>> CORRECT!
I learn the way to do projects from her.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I learn how to make projects from her.
She is great teacher to me!
>> She is a great teacher to me!
>> OR: She is a great teacher for me!
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