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When I was little, learning English was really fun. At that time, I just wanted to feel and learn every thing about other countries. I think I just felt envy of their cultures. So I did anything for getting their knowleges . Fpr that I should had study english. so although I'm a koean, I've always had listened, read, spoken and even thought in english. I thought, If I really want to learn foriegn langueses I should spend all my time for using it. Ofcousre It wasn't that stressful or hard at all because it was what I really wanted and loved. But these days, Englsih is not that fun at all. I don't know why. But exectly I know that If I want to speak in english like native speakers, I shoud be a passionate and crious person like what I did before. So now I need another motivation to being like that.
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Hi there my dear [이름]!
Happy brand new week!
Thanks for sending this composition. Fun in learning another language depends on the learner.
Of course, if the person is really interested, learning will be more fun. I hope that you\'ll find the motivation you\'re looking for..
Have a great night!
~Teacher Shanee
When I was little, learning English was really fun.
>>Correct!
At that time, I just wanted to feel and learn every thing about other countries.
>>Correct!
I think I just felt envy of their cultures.
>>I think I just envied their cultures.
So I did anything for getting their knowleges .
>>So I did everything to get knowledge about them.
Fpr that I should had study english.
>>For that I had to study English.
so although I\'m a koean, I\'ve always had listened, read, spoken and even thought in english.
>>So although I\'m a Korean, I\'ve always listened to English songs, read English books and articles, and even spoke and thought in English.
I thought, If I really want to learn foriegn langueses I should spend all my time for using it.
>>I thought, if I really want to learn foreign languages, I should spend all my time using them.
Ofcousre It wasn\'t that stressful or hard at all because it was what I really wanted and loved.
>>Correct! (It=it, languages)
But these days, Englsih is not that fun at all.
>>Correct!
I don\'t know why.
>>Correct!
But exectly I know that If I want to speak in english like native speakers, I shoud be a passionate and crious person like what I did before.
>>But I definitely know that if I want to speak in English like a natice speaker, I should be passionate and curious as I used to.
So now I need another motivation to being like that.
>>So I need another motivation to be like that.
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